The beggining of a new story

2009-12-12 03:32:29 by J-Scene

The darkness was overwhelming my mind as i slowly rose from the floor and dusted my pants off and observing the giant rip on my jacket, Slowly and quietly asking if anyone was still alive from the helicopter crash. No Response. Yet. The dankness of the room getting to me slowly.

awakened by a sound of a whisper, a careless whisper.A Girl stands up, confused is what she is. she hears another noise, but She does'nt hear it well. her red dress is torn from the wreckage, now she is just ready to look in this room..it's filthy, dark, and lonely. wishing she could find life again...

Hearing the slight clatter of a pan i look twords the direction the noise came from, And slowly picks up a small lead pipe from off the ground For defense Against whatever it may be.

she see's something near but far... she cant really see. all she sees is something shiny. she must go towards it..maybe its her out...out of this place. ouch! She stepped on a piece of glass with my bare feet. now she must go towards whatever she see's.

Sliding my back against a wall i slowly creep over to where i heard the noise, Readying the pipe.

almost to the doorway, making one step at a time. FINALLY at the doorway. at the corner of her eye She see a pipe and somebody holding it.... wondering who is it.

slips out from the shadows, recognizing her immediatly, "ashley?"

she hears her name, and replies "yes?" "whose there? Josh? anybody?"

"It's Josh" i whisper quietly "we need to find a place to hide, Something is moving around in here...." slowly walking over to her in my ripped jacket.

"my foot is cut really bad. the pain is dwelling. what's in here? I don't hear anything"

Slowly picking up another pipe and giving it to her, "i heard something around where i was, We need to get out before it finds us, I'll gets us out...." Looking around.

"okay, ready" following him as much as possible. "where are we even going, i mean we got to find some place outta here."

Looks around "Im going to bust throught this door and whatever you do dont stop running, but keep following me, We'll make it somewhere" readying myself as she hears a groan in the distant parts of the house.

agrees. he busts down the door to reveal something startling.... something so celestial.

Looking at it quietly as i run out holding her hand "what the....?"

"what's wrong?" looking at the light it was a room filled with crimson red walls and celtic signs on the wallpaper... very discreet. "someone's been in here.... we better get out" hears something coming.

Something lunges out at us from the shadows and latches onto me and i fall to the ground, dropping my lead pipe, "GAH!!! WHAT THE HELL!!!" i struggle to stay alive.

"OH MY GOD! " my eyes are totally locked onto him. grasping his hand. and pulling as hard as my heart can. struggling with it for a little while. Finally he is saved. I was paralyzed and i seen the look on his face said the same thing.

Kicking the thing across the face, i jump to my feet Grab the pipe and bash it into the creatures Face many times, Before slowly lowering the pipe as it's blood runs down my face.

standing there shaking and just really scared. finally i spoke "what was that...." speechless and redundant i said it over and over again.

Flips over the body almost puking as i see the Dead body's Rotten face, And Turns around, "we need to get out.."

"let's got then." being the first to walk away a few steps.... then hearing another sound...."if i were you, we better not got his way... She sense's something tragic. It will be safe if we went here." Observing an open door that was awkwardly amazing.

Breaking the pipe so it has a sharp end, as i grab her hand and walk outside, looking around in the dark, my eyes adjusting, We keep walking as i look at building and hear groaning of creatures.

right beside him...walking in the dark. until at that very moment i heard whispers... it got very tense at this point. thinking of what would happen if it was something... wondering if we will ever get out.

Looks into another building, Listening Quietly, Then i pull her into the building and block the door with a cabinent that was turned over, "search the building...."

"alright" searching in this room...

Walking into another room in the building looking for Food, Weapons, And barricading tools.

while he's searching.... she hear's singing the other room. reminds her of the story the Odyssey... the sirens. as she walk's away slowly she seem's to lose herself in this vision... usually visions of her past. slowly in the mind she's lost.

See's a slight shine in a corner and picks it up, then polishes it off recognizing its a pistol, then i look where i saw it and i see two more with several clips. "Ashley!! Come here!"

got out of the daze. "what!" i look over and see something shiny in his hands.

"hahaha, There Are guns here!" Uncovering a small box of shotgun shells, But no shotguns, And three pistols.

"why would a monster have guns?! but whatever haha!"

"I found these! I just need to board up the place now, there has to be food around here somewhere! Come in here so you dont get hurt." Slowly reloading all the clips.

"okay. ill look for food." walking around with such intesity. looking,searching for some food, even though my appetite is gone.

Walking back in with a backpack full of canned foods and fruit, "now all we need is something to make a fire with...."

"where in the world did you get that? and ill go search for wood." she finds the wood to make a fire.

"It was in the freezer in the back, Apparently this place was a deli, Explains the guns and the food." Packing things up into the backpack.

"well, what a fortunate thing we've landed here." helps him fill the backpack.

"yeah... dunno what i'd do if i was alone... i probably wouldnt last long." Places last can into the bag.

"why you say that? you probablly would of lasted longer than me. im happy im not alone either. it would probably be lonely i guess."

Sliding a clip into my pistol and cocking it, "yeah well, i dont wanna be alone, so yeah...... Were going to go out to find a better spot soon, get some rest." sitting on the deli counter.

"alright." that night, she just layed there restless until She fell asleep.

Stays up guarding her while she slept, Restlessly squeezing the grip of the gun, The occasional scraping on the boarded up door.

hearing the sound on the door made her very weary of my surroundings. she was thinking maybe they were home again but, she doubted it. she awoke to see him but fell back asleep soon.

Leaning against the wall, as i slide the gun into my lap and i lay back looking at the ceiling, "god we are f**ked....."

She wake's up. "what do you mean? isn't there a chance?"

"yeah theres a chance..... but how are we going to do it.... we're two people...." tightening my grip on the gun.

"two people can make it out of here.... if we had luck."

"ok then, where should wThe darkness was overwhelming my mind as i slowly rose from the floor and dusted my pants off and observing the giant rip on my jacket, Slowly and quietly asking if anyone was still alive from the helicopter crash. No Response. Yet. The dankness of the room getting to me slowly.

awakened by a sound of a whisper, a careless whisper.A Girl stands up, confused is what she is. she hears another noise, but She does'nt hear it well. her red dress is torn from the wreckage, now she is just ready to look in this room..it's filthy, dark, and lonely. wishing she could find life again...

Hearing the slight clatter of a pan i look twords the direction the noise came from, And slowly picks up a small lead pipe from off the ground For defense Against whatever it may be.

she see's something near but far... she cant really see. all she sees is something shiny. she must go towards it..maybe its her out...out of this place. ouch! She stepped on a piece of glass with my bare feet. now she must go towards whatever she see's.

Sliding my back against a wall i slowly creep over to where i heard the noise, Readying the pipe.

almost to the doorway, making one step at a time. FINALLY at the doorway. at the corner of her eye She see a pipe and somebody holding it.... wondering who is it.

slips out from the shadows, recognizing her immediatly, "ashley?"

she hears her name, and replies "yes?" "whose there? Josh? anybody?"

"It's Josh" i whisper quietly "we need to find a place to hide, Something is moving around in here...." slowly walking over to her in my ripped jacket.

"my foot is cut really bad. the pain is dwelling. what's in here? I don't hear anything"

Slowly picking up another pipe and giving it to her, "i heard something around where i was, We need to get out before it finds us, I'll gets us out...." Looking around.

"okay, ready" following him as much as possible. "where are we even going, i mean we got to find some place outta here."

Looks around "Im going to bust throught this door and whatever you do dont stop running, but keep following me, We'll make it somewhere" readying myself as she hears a groan in the distant parts of the house.

agrees. he busts down the door to reveal something startling.... something so celestial.

Looking at it quietly as i run out holding her hand "what the....?"

"what's wrong?" looking at the light it was a room filled with crimson red walls and celtic signs on the wallpaper... very discreet. "someone's been in here.... we better get out" hears something coming.

Something lunges out at us from the shadows and latches onto me and i fall to the ground, dropping my lead pipe, "GAH!!! WHAT THE HELL!!!" i struggle to stay alive.

"OH MY GOD! " my eyes are totally locked onto him. grasping his hand. and pulling as hard as my heart can. struggling with it for a little while. Finally he is saved. I was paralyzed and i seen the look on his face said the same thing.

Kicking the thing across the face, i jump to my feet Grab the pipe and bash it into the creatures Face many times, Before slowly lowering the pipe as it's blood runs down my face.

standing there shaking and just really scared. finally i spoke "what was that...." speechless and redundant i said it over and over again.

Flips over the body almost puking as i see the Dead body's Rotten face, And Turns around, "we need to get out.."

"let's got then." being the first to walk away a few steps.... then hearing another sound...."if i were you, we better not got his way... She sense's something tragic. It will be safe if we went here." Observing an open door that was awkwardly amazing.

Breaking the pipe so it has a sharp end, as i grab her hand and walk outside, looking around in the dark, my eyes adjusting, We keep walking as i look at building and hear groaning of creatures.

right beside him...walking in the dark. until at that very moment i heard whispers... it got very tense at this point. thinking of what would happen if it was something... wondering if we will ever get out.

Looks into another building, Listening Quietly, Then i pull her into the building and block the door with a cabinent that was turned over, "search the building...."

"alright" searching in this room...

Walking into another room in the building looking for Food, Weapons, And barricading tools.

while he's searching.... she hear's singing the other room. reminds her of the story the Odyssey... the sirens. as she walk's away slowly she seem's to lose herself in this vision... usually visions of her past. slowly in the mind she's lost.

See's a slight shine in a corner and picks it up, then polishes it off recognizing its a pistol, then i look where i saw it and i see two more with several clips. "Ashley!! Come here!"

got out of the daze. "what!" i look over and see something shiny in his hands.

"hahaha, There Are guns here!" Uncovering a small box of shotgun shells, But no shotguns, And three pistols.

"why would a monster have guns?! but whatever haha!"

"I found these! I just need to board up the place now, there has to be food around here somewhere! Come in here so you dont get hurt." Slowly reloading all the clips.

"okay. ill look for food." walking around with such intesity. looking,searching for some food, even though my appetite is gone.

Walking back in with a backpack full of canned foods and fruit, "now all we need is something to make a fire with...."

"where in the world did you get that? and ill go search for wood." she finds the wood to make a fire.

"It was in the freezer in the back, Apparently this place was a deli, Explains the guns and the food." Packing things up into the backpack.

"well, what a fortunate thing we've landed here." helps him fill the backpack.

"yeah... dunno what i'd do if i was alone... i probably wouldnt last long." Places last can into the bag.

"why you say that? you probablly would of lasted longer than me. im happy im not alone either. it would probably be lonely i guess."

Sliding a clip into my pistol and cocking it, "yeah well, i dont wanna be alone, so yeah...... Were going to go out to find a better spot soon, get some rest." sitting on the deli counter.

"alright." that night, she just layed there restless until She fell asleep.

Stays up guarding her while she slept, Restlessly squeezing the grip of the gun, The occasional scraping on the boarded up door.

hearing the sound on the door made her very weary of my surroundings. she was thinking maybe they were home again but, she doubted it. she awoke to see him but fell back asleep soon.

Leaning against the wall, as i slide the gun into my lap and i lay back looking at the ceiling, "god we are f**ked....."

She wake's up. "what do you mean? isn't there a chance?"

"yeah theres a chance..... but how are we going to do it.... we're two people...." tightening my grip on the gun.

"two people can make it out of here.... if we had luck."

"ok then, where should we head? We dont have anywhere to go...."

End of Part 1 Thanks! Kazukaro@hotmail.com
e head? We dont have anywhere to go...."

End of Part 1 Thanks! Kazukaro@hotmail.com


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